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It is the time of shadows, mystery, and new beginnings,
dawn has come to the Highlands,
morning has come by the sea.

The sun rising o'er chaotic waters,
its light dancing,
entrancing those who truly see.

A dove soars,
weary, mourning,
unconquered,

Coming out from the valley night,
suffocated by dark mists,
surrounded by the dark towers.

She now stands on a rise,
eyes filled with the longing for light,
ears filled with the magic of song.

The breeze brings the scent of mountain flowers,
the caress of spirits past,
the comfort of angels.

Her heart feels everything,
untamed passions fill her soul,
and she reaches for a dream.

At her feet an eastbound stream beckons her,
a journey towards hope unknown,
will ye go lassie go?

At her side a reflection beckons her,
gem or illusion?
will ye go lassie go?
This is my birthday gift to my new good friend :iconlacolombededeuil: whose birthday is May 7.

I am just beginning to discover the depth of her wisdom.

The two key phrases at the end of this poem were inspired by this YouTube video at [link]
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LaColombeDeDeuil Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010  Professional General Artist
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Oh how i love this - can i use it as mine this year too if i see it? this mourning dove is flying on borrowed wings.

katti

you are on my front page in my id
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Dragonesque Featured By Owner May 10, 2010
Sure Katti!

Sorry about the late reply. I haven't been checking these things like I should.
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fluffgirl1941 Featured By Owner May 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
all you need now is get robert patterson to sing it..and you will make a fortune... i like it...
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Dragonesque Featured By Owner May 10, 2009
I am happy you like the poem. :)

If Robert Patterson did it similar in style to his Twilight contributions it would surely have that enchanting, mystic feeling.
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fluffgirl1941 Featured By Owner May 10, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I totally agree.. reminds me of joe cocker .. his voice and style.. I liked it..
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Villenueve Featured By Owner May 7, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Very beautifully written!:rose:
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Dragonesque Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
Thank-you so much and thank you for the :+fav:.

The style is very similar to your poems :D.
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Villenueve Featured By Owner May 21, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
A pleasure dear friend!,I love your works! :hug:
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LaColombeDeDeuil Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional General Artist
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Oh my, this lassie is teary eyed! What beauty, what truths! What a writer you are! Bless you my friend, this is incredible!

hugs,
katti
:blackrose:
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Dragonesque Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
I am happy and honored that you like it! :dance:

And thank-you for the compliment since you are an amazing writer as well. :)

Your life's story gave me a lot of material to work with, it is really movie script material ... and its not over yet!

*hugs*
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional Writer
Awesome video and the words are just as awesome... :clap:
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Dragonesque Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
Thank-you so much! That is quite a compliment coming from you.

And thanks for the :+fav:.
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional Writer
:iconwelcome1plz::iconwelcome2plz::iconwelcome3plz::iconwelcome4plz: :iconbluejayplz:
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